When uploading our final music video I found another group from another school that had done the same song as us so our group decided to watch it and talk about what we liked and what we didn't and what they could have done to improve.
This is the video they have made:
I personally do not like the video as I found most of it very cringy and cliché. Especially the bit at the end where she kisses another guy and then sticks her finger up at the camera. They have used lots of different shots which is good but a lot of them are repeated so therefore the storyline becomes unclear for the audience to view.