Good comments that people said about our video:
"Outstanding" 39/40
"Great editing and performance"39/40
"Editing was amazing" 38/40
"One of the best" 38/40
"Lip-Syncing is solid" 37/40
"Editing is the best of the year" 38/40
"Best one i've seen" 36/40
Bad comments people said about our video:
"Why the drugs?"
"I imagined her to be more innocent due to her digipak images"
"Few repeated shots"
"Focus less on drugs/alcohol"
"Too influenced by Skins"
"The video portrays her in a different way to the digipak, was this intended?"
HOW WE CAN IMPROVE OUR MUSIC VIDEO:
We can improve our video by getting rid of a few of the repeated and drug shots and adding more of the performance shots, as a lot of the audience are confused about the drugs being in it. Everyone seems to love the editing so we need to keep doing that to keep the standard up. We have kept the pace up when the song builds so that the shots match the beat of the music so when we change a few shots we need to keep doing this.